Review: Theirs by Hazel Gower

Title: Theirs
Author: Hazel Gower
Release Date: February 9th 2013
Publisher: Evernight Publishing
Genre: Paranormal Romance
Rating: 2 Hoots
Reviewer: Charity
Buy From: Amazon/ Barnes and Noble

Sum It Up! The idea behind the story was promising.
 

 

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Susie goes to gym to lose weight and hires a hot personal trainer she doesn’t realize is a bear shifter.

Brian is a co-owner of Healthy Bodies and his mate has just walked through the door looking for a personal trainer. He knows he is the right bear for the job. The only problem is, he's not Susie’s only mate. His brother Blake is in the running too. Can they learn to share?

They must convince Susie she is theirs. Together Blake and Brian teach her how great food can really be, and exercise can be a lot of fun.

Will Susie be able to handle two bears taking over her life? Can she live in this strange new paranormal world? Is she strong enough to stand by her two men? (Goodreads)

 

Review: 

The idea behind the story was promising, but it just wasn’t executed properly. There were too many loose ends, relationships progressed too fast, and acceptance was entirely too soon. Unfortunately the editing needed to be done better-grammatical errors, name errors, sentence structures, etc. The climax was rushed and seemingly thrown in. Don’t even get me started on the epilogue. If this story is rereleased later with more details, character development, relationship development, and plot line work then I wouldn’t mind rereading it, but as it stands I cannot in good conscience recommend this to anyone.